We are great writers

WALT: great writers use a success criteria to check that they have written a great piece of writing.

Success Criteria:

Have I written a great piece of writing?

Does my writing have all of these things?

B

Heath’s piece of writing:

A long, long time ago I went fishing with my friend Memphis at the really old wharf. I caught a big shark with huge teeth. It was very big. My black and blue rod got tangled up. Luckily, I could wind my rod in so it could get untangled.

Reflection:

Heath had a really cool picture that he used to plan his writing.

Heath sounded out the word fishing by being a robot.

Heath looked around the room to help him write the word my.

Heath had finger spaces between every word.

Heath used a full stop at the end of every sentence.

Heath proof read his work.

Heath used these wow words: really old, a long, long time ago, big, huge.

Heath used capital letters at the start of a sentence and to name his friend Memphis.