Insect Sculptures

WALT: we can evaluate our writing using two stars and a wish.

Ryder: 

* Full stops at the end of each sentence
* Wrote two sentences.
* finger spaces
* Capital letter at the start of the writing.
wish: More wow words in the writing

* careful with forming letters correctly

* Started the sentence with a capital letter

* Used finger spaces between each word.

Wish: Wow words to describe the body, head and legs. 

Making robots

WALT:  we can tell the reader more about what happened by explaining where, when, what, who, and why.